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WARNING, SUPERBLY LONG STRIP

Ah, I'm generally not going to use this format for this comic if I decide to continue with it.
By that I mean I was planning on coloring the whole thing and doing pages rather then strips. The strips are only for flashback items like this and the reason I didn't color them is that I did all 10 strips at once and kinda overwhelmed myself XD

So yeah, if i do decide to continue with this I aren't going to go off completely on canon or storyline
because that would be EXTREMELY boring unless you haven't played the game.
In which case I recommend playing the game and not reading comics.

This aint really spoilery since the death of Sparrow is mentioned but never played out or detailed on in the games. >_>;
Just to clarify, there's no poison or suicide involved, she just kinda sensed death was coming, like an animal. I don't think that would be too outta the question with a hero right?
My sister mentioned that it's like your coming into the middle of a comic, which I suppose kinda fits since you're coming into the middle of someone's life [or rather the end of]
Still bad writing on my part XP
The art style was suggested by ~DeathwatchAP
Actually, he said I should use the Panty and Stocking with Garterbelt style but I ain't the type of artist that goes about ripping off other styles. Though I did like the idea of doing it in a more cartoonie style as that would be easier on my poor poor hands XP

In case you can't read my handwriting:
Sparrow: Finally they're gone
"Those fucking noble and politition bastards are all leeches!
I haven't gone senile yet dammit!!"*
Jasper: "They probably thought that the death of your husband and birth of your son at your age has made you weak"
Sparrow: "They thought wrong!**
Lucky my gun was 'mysteriously' empty"
Jasper: "I don't know what you're talking about"
Sparrow: "I don't know what I'd do without my true friends.
Especially my cute lil' boy toy, ha ha"
"Boy toy" pointing at Walter
Jasper: "We ask ourselves that everyday"
Sparrow: "oh! That reminds me!
"Can you two deliver this to my precious Logan?"
Walter: "Both of us?"
Jasper: "I'm sure Logan will love the wrapping"***
Sparrow: "Logan will be 'too busy' to open it right away and Jasper doesn't have the muscle to convince him otherwise.
I'll be fine alone! Quality time with my son won't kill me"
Walter: "Alright, I get your point, we'll be back as soon as Logan's opened it."
Sparrow: "Your mommy's a liar"
Blue: "Bwu flfth"
Sparrow: "How's mama look?"
"Your mama's doing a cruel thing.
"But I can't let them see me fall like this.
"Do me a favor sweetheart.
"I asked walter to take care of you.
"Maybe you could watch him too? He'll be lonely without something to do
"Tch! Is it really snowing? ****
How cruel!"
Blue: "Hff"
Sparrow: "I guess that means it's time
"Is that right theresa?
"Not much of an angel"
Walter: "You majesty?"
"I'll get help!
"Walter, take the prince!"
Sparrow: "Goodbye
"to all my precious things."

"Chapter 1: Corpse Flower *****
end"

*I was actually going to change this senile line to "I'm not dead yet!" Which is funny in itself but also in reference to Monty Python and the Holy Grail.
**This is an inside joke. Asked someone "So I hrd u liek mudkips" and the screamed back "YOU HEARD WRONG"
***This is about one of the only things I colored cuz you'd miss the joke if I didn't. The wrapping is supposed to be super fruity, like the kind you'd wrap a small girl's presents in.
****Since Rose died on a snowy day...uh I think so anyway. I couldn't check at the time DX
In the very least it was winter
*****I suppose it's really more of a prologue then a chapter but still.
It's named "Corpse Flower" after the miku song : [link] The english lyrics should be in there too.
I like the idea of naming each chapter after vocaloid songs Xd

Blegh, the idea of seeing theresa when you're dying scares me actually >A<

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ReAvEr3's avatar
so moving, I love it!! And the way you draw... God I wish I could draw that well!! Encore!